Short Story

Walt:  create a descriptive passage using a range of suitable adjectives and adverbs to create an image in the reader’s mind.

Idea Details

A young man was driving his dads car.	boy steals the car and goes to a 21st drives drunk DEAD Boy: Jacob * When he all of a sudden he increased the speed while his foot was on the accelerator he was going 120 km p/h he was feeling shocked and started to panic * Then he falls in a ditch and his mates were in the back knocked out with concussion
IDEA	DETAIL
Character Traits (2 year old boy)	1.Always wants everything 2.grasps stuff

Now put these together into a paragraph.

One night on Jacob’s friend's 21st they were all out drinking and Jacob was late so he rushed to get dressed and then grabbed his dad's keys and ran to his car to try start it and then he finally started it.

rmmm..RMMM..rmmm his car wouldnt start then he saw his dads car up the top of the driveway “since dads in bed lets take the car” Jacob said. So they drove to the pub to see his friend for his 21st.

On the way his mate rang Jacob up “Get some Booze”  “Ok i'm on my way”

So Jacob left to the liquor store to buy some booze. Finally he reached the 21st and he just go there in time for the big party. Jacob was amazed of how many people were there.

He saw his friends “i got the booze” said jacob “Thanks Jacob” “no problem”,

So that night jacob and his friends were just drinking, and drinking, and drinking all night. Then i was getting dark “ok bro im going” said jacob, no you can’t you have been drinking i'll be fine who is coming me said his friends, get in guys.

So they left to their way home then they heard sirens of the police so he drove fast down the road to get a way then he was too concentrated on the guys in the back and he lands in a stream with his friends in the back knocked out or dead jacob was scared he was just alive he screamed “HELP” to the police so they called and ambulance and they got taken to the hospital where he was taken care of.

2 days later he finally got out of hospital when he got told by the cops that he had to go to imprisonment for 1 whole year.